Fox News Media Critique
I was searching through many news sites to find an article to critique, and this one particularly caught my eye just from the title. "Blood stains, broken crystal bowls reported after brawl at New York wedding reception," just does not sound promising to begin with. After reading just the first paragraph, I noted that the article was lacking a few things to make it a considerably journalistic piece.
Initially, it lacks the yardstick of newsworthiness. Why would a national news platform report on a minor happening in New York State? How does a private wedding affect the audience as a whole? The topic of a minor incident would categorize as peripheral, rather than the core that media is supposed to bring us. Also, the article is not necessarily important. Instead of following the journalistic principle of making the important interesting, they seemed to have done the opposite. Why should they focus on something that is a small issue rather than the millions of other relevant events occurring today?
In addition to these problems, the article also seems to lack proper verification. The author did verify the truth with the local police, but the firsthand sources were given with very limited detail. They referred to a source as "one person who worked the event," which seems unacceptable. How do we, as audience members, know that this is true?
Ultimately, my biggest grievance with this article is the last sentence. The author states that, "No arrests have been reported." If no arrests have been reported, let alone any potential suspects, the story is simply unimportant. If a possible suspect had been identified, then the journalist may have been able to get the person's perspective. However, this yardstick of fairness seemed to be left out. Additionally, the article does not follow the yardstick of explanation. The report seems to be very episodic, considering that they did not follow up on the outcome of the crime.